A little writer with a long way to go

Lost Friend

I heard
You ran away
I cannot blame you but
I wish you would have taken me
Come back

Another poem from my collection – Cinquain style

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Comments on: "Lost Friend" (2)

  1. Poetry Police here. Hi Ryn! I like this, despite its sadness. How ’bout some punctuation?

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    • I’m actually not much of a fan of punctuation in my own poetry. I can never figure out exactly where I want it or what I should even use it.

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