I heard
You ran away
I cannot blame you but
I wish you would have taken me
Come back
Another poem from my collection – Cinquain style
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Lost Friend
April 14, 2014
A little writer with a long way to go
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Comments on: "Lost Friend" (2)
Poetry Police here. Hi Ryn! I like this, despite its sadness. How ’bout some punctuation?
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I’m actually not much of a fan of punctuation in my own poetry. I can never figure out exactly where I want it or what I should even use it.
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