Lost Friend

A little writer with a long way to go

April 14, 2014

I heard
You ran away
I cannot blame you but
I wish you would have taken me
Come back

Another poem from my collection – Cinquain style

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Sherry said:

April 15, 2014 at 11:26 am

Poetry Police here. Hi Ryn! I like this, despite its sadness. How ’bout some punctuation?

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- justryn said:
  
  April 15, 2014 at 1:58 pm
  
  I’m actually not much of a fan of punctuation in my own poetry. I can never figure out exactly where I want it or what I should even use it.
  
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